I am thinking
Your hands on me
Running down my back
And up again
Down over my hardening nipples
Down my legs
And up again, stopping.
Dearest Jenna, could something be waiting in your attic to attack me? My McAfee Virus Scan Thing gave me this big old alert, but I proceeded anyway.
Sometimes McAfee Virus scan is a little paranoid. All I found was a lovely poem!
Oh, my goodness, Blooming Psycho! Nothing here in my attic but me. I’ll have my computer guy check everything out. Thanks for reading anyway!
I am thinking
Such a lovely, sizzling, sensual poem. Well done!
Guys cross whole oceans and hemispheres because of invitations such as yours. 🙂 Well-written and seriously sexy. 🙂
Oooooh! *fans herself* Is it getting hot in here?
Well done! Really conveys the anticipation of intimacy with just the right amount of heat.
This just leaves me wanting more. 😉
Yeah, me too.
This woke me up! Wonderfully written, perfect pacing and sensual language. I just might have to read it a few more times.
*fans self* Wow, that is an invitation that would be hard to pass up, I’d think. Sexy and beautifully written. Great job!
that’s just great…
just a few simple words and my mind is reeling with wicked thoughts
the image at the bottom, remind me to tell you about what V and I call ‘the trifecta’ sometime…
this was fantastic and wonderful, lyrical and sexy…and made me WANT something of my own.