Holding onto you at this stage feels impossible, like trying to grasp air or water, your intangibility encircling me, entrapping me in an endless ring of flames burning me from the inside out.
Very clever – an unusual and heartfelt interpretation.
“like trying to grasp air or water,” fantastic simile.
Very nicely done.
struck a chord Jenna ! 🙂
I feel the desperation and frustration and hopelessness.
This is a great use of the three words.
I like your unique use of the 3 words. Nicely done!