Letting go

Holding onto you at this stage feels impossible, like trying to grasp air or water, your intangibility encircling me, entrapping me in an endless ring of flames burning me from the inside out.


  1. Freya says:

    Very clever – an unusual and heartfelt interpretation.

  2. LaTonya says:

    “like trying to grasp air or water,” fantastic simile.

  3. Yve says:

    Very nicely done.

  4. struck a chord Jenna ! 🙂

  5. Debbie says:

    I feel the desperation and frustration and hopelessness.

  6. Draug419 says:

    This is a great use of the three words.

  7. Janna says:

    I like your unique use of the 3 words. Nicely done!